Score: 10

"awesome"

submission: 2008 Showreel

date: December 22, 2008

great job. I've liked your work since i saw the one where the wire becomes alive and makes himself. Someday i hope i can be as good as you.

amazing

Score: 10

"dood, great job."

submission: News Alert! Ep. 1

date: December 12, 2008

you said its one of your first and even if it wasnt it would still be good.

the sound quality was pretty good, the gradient for Mr.Figity wasnt that bad at all (usually gradients suck), the whole movie was funny, and i look forward to more flashes from you.

one thing to improve on would possibly make more detailed characters and have their mouths move in sync.

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ps: for the person below me, "Fidgety" (spelled differently than the author spelled it) means constantly moving for no reason. thats why its funny :D

Score: 5

"i would say..."

submission: the tegreninja clip

date: December 9, 2008

try to make it longer, and add a little more "in between" frames. sometimes when the ninja was attacking it was a little glitchy looking. And maybe add a little more detail or keep the simplistic look you have, either way is fine. Great nija at the end, maybe less blood.

thats my advice,
crdbrd

Score: 9

"pretty nice!"

submission: Smiley Collector

date: December 6, 2008

the graphics are simple and nice, the mouse movement is unique in a good and fun way, and the whole game itself is pretty enjoyable.

as for the actionscript, every time you click on instructions it plays the music. so you can have about 10 copies of the song running at one time. i dont really care if you fix it because the game itself will not be drastically better or worse if you do.

best of luck,
crdbrd

Score: 9

"this is great!"

submission: 3dDavidFace

date: November 18, 2008

this is really cool! some tips would be to add some buttons that let you pick a different face or change background or music. I dont know why, but this is a very fun game which is pretty sweet.

Score: 10

"that was sweet!"

submission: art in the playground

date: June 3, 2008

it was animated well and had a Creature Comforts feels to it (if you know what that is)
it was funy what the kids said sometimes and like Masquatto said the background video made it all the more exiting.

great job.

Score: 6

"it was good for your first."

submission: Supa Mario Brudas.

date: June 3, 2008

or second i guess. you shouldnt have uploaded two, because after it has passed judgment you can upload a new version. (just to let you know : )
**blamming other one**

...anyway this is a good first flash. im sure its not your first EVER, but i get what you mean.

overall:
-the graphics were pretty good
-the animation wasnt very smooth at all
-the machine was pretty sweet. (for some reason i enjoyed when it said "loading...")

Score: 8

"that would have been fun if..."

submission: The Keyboard Challenge

date: June 3, 2008

since my keyboard is crappy it only lets me press like 4 buttons at a time, so cant mash all the buttons but rather 4 at a time!
for this i would suggest making another gameplay mode or something where the score is determined by who can press a certain button or two buttons the fastest, because im sure slow-keyboarders out there suck at this game.

4/5 great job!

Score: 0

"what?"

submission: DBZ stick fight animation

date: May 31, 2008

you make it sound like you didnt make it.
(and you didnt because it is probably lagging because of a slow webcam or something, causing some of the frames to not be recorded)

prove me wrong!

Score: 9

"thats swasome...ish"

submission: Medieval Quest

date: May 29, 2008

its really cool and i like pick-your-path games.
it had pretty good graphics and such and a good storyline but a few things weren't that good:
-the text was way too hard to read for me
-yep, thats it

thanks for submitting this it was a good waste of my time =p
next time though, add music and better fonts.

(btw what was the secret boss, i couldnt find it.)