great job. I've liked your work since i saw the one where the wire becomes alive and makes himself. Someday i hope i can be as good as you.
dood, great job.
you said its one of your first and even if it wasnt it would still be good.
the sound quality was pretty good, the gradient for Mr.Figity wasnt that bad at all (usually gradients suck), the whole movie was funny, and i look forward to more flashes from you.
one thing to improve on would possibly make more detailed characters and have their mouths move in sync.
ps: for the person below me, "Fidgety" (spelled differently than the author spelled it) means constantly moving for no reason. thats why its funny :D
i would say...
try to make it longer, and add a little more "in between" frames. sometimes when the ninja was attacking it was a little glitchy looking. And maybe add a little more detail or keep the simplistic look you have, either way is fine. Great nija at the end, maybe less blood.
thats my advice,
that was sweet!
it was animated well and had a Creature Comforts feels to it (if you know what that is)
it was funy what the kids said sometimes and like Masquatto said the background video made it all the more exiting.
it was good for your first.
or second i guess. you shouldnt have uploaded two, because after it has passed judgment you can upload a new version. (just to let you know : )
**blamming other one**
...anyway this is a good first flash. im sure its not your first EVER, but i get what you mean.
-the graphics were pretty good
-the animation wasnt very smooth at all
-the machine was pretty sweet. (for some reason i enjoyed when it said "loading...")
its my first REAL flsh because i made a crappy DBZ stick figure one with a gay story line and ya...i want to burn it.........
you make it sound like you didnt make it.
(and you didnt because it is probably lagging because of a slow webcam or something, causing some of the frames to not be recorded)
prove me wrong!
hey this the first clay ive seen in quite a while...its not the best(sorry) but its still good and deserves AT LEAST a 3.
thanks for submitting a clay short that was pretty good, unlike some of the clay crap uploaded sometimes.
i liked the tut, it explains alot...
nice choice of sound, strongbad really brightens anyone's day.
it would have been good to use buttons, as the speed of the text was a little slow for me. also the menu screen would be nice, but i understand you're working on that.so overall great job!
Remember it has a play and pause button
i realize its unfinished but,
-you definitely need a preloader. it kept glitching and lagging almost the whole flash.
-add some sound from the Audio Portal, it makes your flash seem more quality-ish than having no sound at all
-I'm going to blam this...please finish and repost it for a higher rating
i know how...
nice job, but it would be better if it was faster =P
to change the frame rate...
1: at the top (where the toolbars are) find "MODIFY" and click it
2: then click on "DOCUMENT"
3 :find the box that says "Frame rate" and change the number to something else...most people use 30 FPS, but just use whatever you want
PS: or you could skip steps "1" and "2" and click CTRL+J
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