it was good for your first.
or second i guess. you shouldnt have uploaded two, because after it has passed judgment you can upload a new version. (just to let you know : )
**blamming other one**
...anyway this is a good first flash. im sure its not your first EVER, but i get what you mean.
overall:
-the graphics were pretty good
-the animation wasnt very smooth at all
-the machine was pretty sweet. (for some reason i enjoyed when it said "loading...")